Friday, January 14, 2011

Vocabulary Quiz, Paragraph

One day the witches were out for a nice walk drinking from their chalices when all of the sudden a man popped out of the trees. Of course these are dauntless witches they aren't afraid of anything. He told them he has a secret he to tell them. He kept prating about some thing about macbeth but they couldn't understand him. So they told him they were going to give him corporal punishment unless he told them the secret. Once they heard it they knew they had to got after macbeth. The witches still have undivulged the secret. So we will never no why the witches are after macbeth.

1 comment:

  1. Good use of vocabulary.

    Make sure you capitalize Macbeth, and look at inserting a couple of commas (ex: One day the witches were out for a nice walk, drinking from their chalices, when all of a sudden a man popped out of the trees.

    He kept prating about Macbeth, but they couldn't understand him.

    Comma = before a conjunction; to separate things in a series (run, drink, when popped out a man).

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